SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 |) c7 S8 M1 t' M) \Four additional tires with rims
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
$ e& M. a' ]$ j1 N8 W* X* RPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
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Child safety locks
* V' X% X1 O6 m/ ]5 iRear window defroster
' n3 T0 u" C( S7 s% U6 [; \Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
6 C2 {3 v0 k" @$ PAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
4 \  R3 G* N3 O6 GAirbag: side
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1 o5 n& p, r: T3 I! F* i6 bFog lights

  o" c$ h, G1 \* c. _  A**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

8 W) y! m* x! N2 V$ p- a. BDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

: g  u8 c3 W+ j$ l3 s! L. eIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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8 _& l- u5 j( n, e7 d1 R6 FIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
+ ?: X. [4 z( ^; B! F7 q9 T IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

/ u2 A0 @; r3 N- a' H0 FBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
# p1 o! U6 c/ e0 n这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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5 j& @- P$ ]9 X, ~) O, o. _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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. I% N5 ^2 [1 ~1 i! QSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

, _  c  M* q- u+ C8 A6 X  h6 [Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

) b" n4 k4 j7 b; |: ~5 g"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

+ p; @5 p$ c  ]. p0 i, BThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.