SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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- O/ O5 |' ?! Y' `- y, T% ^) ?/ j7 AAutomatic transmission
Silver
: j+ m. k0 {% e4 Y+ j3 _# ]Remote starter and heat blocker
1 d" e1 l" B: _1 X9 ITwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
0 }. Y$ g: l& C, h$ d6 j  T+ o9 |Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
6 D/ d9 I  X4 W" {) CInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
; w& {$ w0 T1 uPower locks
4 c0 x) Y0 X" j4 d& F8 C+ A  hPower mirrors
Power doors
: Q. X; t2 z! j/ j+ v( A9 PPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
. T) \4 \& a, e( z9 |' HBluetooth hands-free operation
/ D% ?" X& C4 O) l" i4 @Radio
0 u9 @7 a1 D/ H% M( ]Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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( l$ w; i: R! W% m* v# q**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
$ I! K) l( l! K6 u/ UIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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+ C$ {& R' m* w, _+ _Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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# W" S8 A, j/ i. v2 Q: e# xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

$ Y7 {( d! D' S7 c3 XIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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6 ]) s0 S' `* gIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

$ `& w2 ~* Q: s6 vBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 B$ S8 A" R! V2 j哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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* ^% g, K$ Y5 }6 {+ `Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
) V: W' k+ C, h7 WThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

2 R- T5 _9 r/ q& m, `9 H1 {- ESorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
6 T% Y  p" ~) m% G: l, LYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

) E6 x, b- D: o+ K6 z. H"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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# |* S+ {2 C$ `5 [3 l* m( K2 oThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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