SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
& l& I" U5 |  t' WAutomatic transmission
Silver
( C5 ]7 W  D- X9 o& ?Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
# s. [% s" M+ v4 g/ WAir Conditioning
' C9 P( N; j2 z7 ?ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
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" P2 D) k7 x6 l# LPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
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Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
! {4 y% m$ z; I  wAirbag: driver
( C$ U) n" I3 D5 b5 f4 S, l; tAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 a* o) ?7 x7 wIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR
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( B  @) C% @' N: A7 k! LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

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IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 ?: i* H! s4 PDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! @0 ~+ e* P; j3 \' n* Z& H这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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* ~# N2 ], s7 g2 }6 Y; |: PBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
! H& b' v) |3 B2 l1 i. X6 S这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

! D5 U) ^( f0 L3 e- C  x+ P哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 h. ~) s! n! \4 VThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

$ u+ c4 I+ S0 j: G3 S5 b1 ]Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
+ V* Q. Y  \3 v, q- ~8 P/ P0 n: M. fYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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% y0 U! T! H6 V" K/ q1 }9 C/ ELast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

  x0 C* ]# J) _" R7 D- ]( GSorry to give you "HARSH" again.