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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪
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6 k' ?. k- r! V9 z$ J" ]                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun! z# {% _0 |1 R. h8 r
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                                       February 1936
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0 {. w  D- {) ~9 A, Y  North country scene:
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  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  e7 P8 D. d  a6 `: z; s6 u, t  J7 }  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.+ c8 ]  _6 Y/ H$ K6 Y1 I( m
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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  One single white immensity., B- \! S. z! V$ @# P/ g

% y3 B% p) n: R3 T+ m  The Yellow River"s swift current
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8 S4 g" G# v! C( ~  Is stilled from end to end.
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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8 |5 _- u2 }% z- E  }  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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  Vying with heaven in stature.
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! T( m0 B) h8 y& e  On a fine day, the land,
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  O+ h1 X8 a3 D5 W* e  Clad in white, adorned in red,. _0 {) ?; Q3 L6 Q+ H* B% b

/ d. k' ]. W- W8 s) d! V6 g" K7 Y  Grows more enchanting.
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( H: _+ k2 ?! T# ^  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage./ @2 F2 @" ~# y$ ^

1 }8 h2 X' [' ?  P  }% g  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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& c, }& h& P: K9 Z# K' A! Y  Were lacking in literary grace,5 E$ E5 I' R( r7 }
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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  And Genghis Khan,
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1 E; d, R3 R' k3 u1 J. X. X6 c! J  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,  y' k) P& S1 _( }' f, E. [6 ^
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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  All are past and gone!$ y  E3 `- C1 s7 f3 ?
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  For truly great men
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7 p  E6 ~- E2 v, v8 d  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:) c( ^& o- E* c: m, z- J
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.9 Q  \  X0 @! E; Z# h+ E

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  一九三六年二月
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采- l! G! I4 Z" M( ]/ w, ^

8 o! r+ y- H4 B: }& Z6 m+ R. U2 c  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕! y. Y$ [3 i. L  r: {
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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. x& Q: O0 v; p- a0 L[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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