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老杨

Alberta

The prosperous province of Alberta is the heart of western Canada. Alberta is the fourth largest province in Canada with area of 255,285 square miles. It includes five main cities: Edmonton, Alberta’s capital and Calgary, Lethbridge, Red Deer and Medicine Hat. Alberta is a resourceful land; include wheat, barley, livestock, water, staggering oil and gas reserves.
Edmonton is a modern and livable city with some of Canada's finest cultural facilities, as well as the world's largest shopping and amusement mall. Calgary is the largest city in the Alberta. One of Calgary’s major attractions is the Olympic Saddledome, a sports arena built to host the 1988 Winter Olympics.
8 y4 B0 G0 o" m% O, [6 }! Z2 fBut for most visitors to Alberta, the great outdoors, not the big cities or the fast bucks, is the main draw. The stunning mountain playgrounds of Banff, Jasper, and Waterton Lakes national parks show off the Canadian Rockies at their best, with pristine glaciers, rushing rivers, and snowcapped peaks reflected in hundreds of high-country lakes.
1 V( R0 c; s8 X' X! mThroughout the province, wide-open spaces, endless blue skies, and big-city culture awaits when you come down from the hills. If you are come to Alberta, you’re sure to find plenty to suit you in here.

connie

The prosperous province of Alberta is the heart of western Canada. Alberta is the fourth largest province in Canada with an area of 255,285 square miles. It includes five main cities: Edmonton, Alberta’s capital and(and去掉，加逗号) Calgary, Lethbridge, Red Deer and Medicine Hat. Alberta is a resourceful land; include（including） wheat, barley, livestock, water, staggering oil and gas reserves.
Edmonton is a modern and livable city with some of Canada's finest cultural facilities, as well as the world's largest shopping and amusement mall. Calgary is the largest city in the(删掉the) Alberta. One of Calgary’s major attractions is the Olympic Saddledome, a sports arena built to host the 1988 Winter Olympics.
9 V- O/ N2 ^4 l5 R$ w# nBut for most visitors to Alberta, the great outdoors, not the big cities or the fast bucks, is the main draw. The stunning mountain playgrounds of Banff, Jasper, and Waterton Lakes national parks show off the Canadian Rockies at their best, with pristine glaciers, rushing rivers, and snowcapped peaks reflected in hundreds of high-country lakes.
9 g1 f! e9 ^9 O/ z. _$ o' qThroughout the province, wide-open spaces, endless blue skies, and big-city culture awaits when you come down from the hills. If you are（will） come to Alberta, you’re sure to find plenty to suit you in here. you're sure to find plenty of sites to suit.

[ Last edited by connie on 2004-11-23 at 10:17 PM ]

connie

另外几点建议，加上southern Alberta 的cattle industry(据说很重要哦)和prairies是不是更好哩~~~:D:D

水上村

恭喜，恭喜，有明显的进步，不都是Alberta is ........    Alberta is ...... 了

woodsflower

As the heart of western Canada. Alberta is the fourth largest province and is prosperous with an area of 255,285 square miles. It is a resourceful land with wheat, barley, livestock, water, staggering oil and gas reserves, and includes five main cities of Edmonton--Alberta’s capital, Calgary, Lethbridge, Red Deer and Medicine Hat.  
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Edmonton is a modern and livable city with some of Canadian finest cultural facilities, as well as the world's largest shopping and amusement mall. Calgary is the largest city in Alberta. One of its major attractions is the Olympic Saddledome--a sports arena built to host the 1988 Winter Olympics.
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To most of the visitors to Alberta, the great outdoor is the main draw, rather than the big cities or the fast bucks. The stunning mountain playgrounds of Banff, Jasper, and Waterton Lakes national parks show off the Canadian Rockies at their best, with pristine glaciers, rushing rivers, and snowcapped peaks reflected in hundreds of high-country lakes.
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Throughout the province, wide-open spaces, endless blue skies, and big-city culture awaits when you come down from the hills. If you come to Alberta, It is certain for you to find suitable plenty here, and also plenty of sites. Welcome to Alberta!