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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember  B+ Y: Q) e1 j0 S& v
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was( e3 r  @1 y+ B4 Z5 f" E7 v6 _

. H7 p8 X2 c% ~exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my* g% s6 u. y! S  t: @# ]* i
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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+ K6 D: T0 D) u& ]4 M every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid+ ]2 X- W# m9 H% m9 B* M
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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) ^0 ~: J" b# S6 ptrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing9 j$ C; E: X- `" C9 t

; c8 L6 w& Z+ c, p on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard : M% n( q# u* y

; g* L$ N1 X( tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.( Q9 _3 j* z% ^8 k2 b" U
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
3 ^" W- V0 w6 E! D2 nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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