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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

" J7 K9 |$ k; P( t7 a! x& d　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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2 a! w! S* \6 W* xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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) }9 u  P& u  `) Vput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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  r1 ?& Q. b+ X7 U  i$ u every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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: \- _9 y6 q! R1 `& _trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

& n+ K* L5 \' E$ N/ w2 dfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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4 N+ G8 x& ^3 M% S) d/ Rdeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

8 F$ i( K7 T. |5 i never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
, U8 b+ F! M6 hwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！