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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一). d# H$ m0 Y$ G; F" ~3 K2 X
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to* `' p$ `' _6 t9 T" P" Y; p: \6 @
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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) u8 i" a) e8 D( R" J little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,' V. a+ t* o7 \  D

% n( V. U& i$ |5 s% I every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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: O- A5 |) R* n! jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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  M  O  b+ S; O% k3 P# ^0 ~ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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" h9 j% E: y& [  R% W. O6 I6 bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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  c( A' f# _( S  j# Zdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!# O, Z" z0 f! O3 H
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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