作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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% l) T+ k/ X. d& ~( D/ X) N; T% r　　　　　One day I always remember

4 m- l6 d4 Z: e) k/ B1 s/ s4 r9 I/ J　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

5 K, k' Y8 p6 n# ~6 E# H little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

; w7 G/ i0 h3 p2 e4 O was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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: k) u; o" @& J' u; jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

$ k0 `8 B8 g$ O  e on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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. v7 K; P" ~% N. l9 ^for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.

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2 J$ T  F- h1 C& h1 E- D/ AAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！