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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% t2 K( q& C; n2 S" X7 G+ [
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     One day I always remember
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6 G; `' Z1 S5 U: r  n4 b  rexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to3 [3 u3 K4 o7 X8 a6 f
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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7 {7 i) g) G# \' D9 b little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,. a" A+ Q* b1 d
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 5 u9 R$ D& a# t( x) \' q
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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. y4 ?) @) ^, N  P2 a% Uthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing- Y1 ~: k- P6 H! H1 }: A  E7 `
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.' `' C% `" |6 u' i7 U( p5 c, j, j
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
" \2 n. ^$ S. qwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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