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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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6 K4 U/ Q, I: Z$ Y+ W8 \  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was( C5 f; \' G. q! B! Z

$ o$ `- H7 S. T5 ]- c" Dexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to9 g$ y+ J9 A: G2 D6 T

$ a* p% d% p# V+ }3 O3 l, B! w1 Yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my2 Z6 \7 ~  t) `. j( O, R; h

7 K3 h' ]" e/ F6 M' z8 Z2 O6 S* a little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,$ h) W7 N' r8 E& `2 ^
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid3 J0 Q$ t& d( v8 C  j
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 5 P0 h$ Q/ R  `0 C0 j8 o

+ \3 n- g: Z9 G! o5 ~, mthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing! S3 X  Y( V/ V/ W9 P# a* Q& G

' n6 y+ {- Q8 o( P on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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" U) L3 ^6 u* i  f7 q0 d0 bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.) S/ `+ T" j1 h
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!% W- J* D# m3 L
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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