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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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: I3 D5 S/ Z+ F, ?     One day I always remember7 ^3 `2 G7 I; e% u

0 c; j) \, K8 e  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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  S8 A1 P4 S& |2 {! U, Qexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to$ s+ p5 r. ]: _, t% g; ?* t( Y4 t, U

6 y- K+ g) J" W) Wput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my# h# D9 y) h! T; @7 e; c/ ?
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,* X+ _7 E( Z3 ^+ _- a! T3 A

5 ]# S4 K8 q0 L1 v- X- i; V6 `9 d# ` every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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. m% @9 G% N6 y5 g was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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- l/ A9 _# B2 n9 t& @( Itrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since / N9 _+ H+ }' |; t: V* s( s  Z8 k' Z

4 j2 h5 A. Z& F/ a0 k( nthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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' Y1 j2 j& t; _* D* [2 d1 ? on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard " s) [" U$ h  g( C$ Q

* U% x$ H& s' b" ~9 n( N# K$ ~for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will3 p$ H& d/ e2 m; I0 h$ F( R$ P
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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: I8 m( r  z; w# g! k[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!3 R- C4 S6 |  B& v# s* t7 |( G; P
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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