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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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1 i, k& F  j; \! ]- K6 Xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

3 Y8 f1 Q! s* n* f0 S# l: Dput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

/ |# l8 [' t! A& j0 a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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0 _% i) H7 d8 s' K; | was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

  Y8 Z8 n- X3 ]# j8 `# i) ]trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

, @! k5 [+ \. d$ |' |; K+ i8 ? on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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5 k) w- y0 ]+ v7 M2 v; qdeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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OliveOil

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connie

GREAT！