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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember5 `- A- U2 w- ]7 k8 K$ V% G7 q
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was) @) u; n7 D: p9 s& D3 @

+ }3 t8 u0 d. f! Cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to: `1 |$ ^! c- |. V

4 ]4 u# y% D3 U  `put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my$ s' `9 y2 I/ N$ p5 M- Z
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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. i, S  m6 [8 y6 D5 D. W9 n/ k every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid  u9 o- A& p8 o) @$ f  s

( R+ H; Z3 K" K* S: v was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 r, U* K; P* f8 t8 k

, V2 `, a7 K) ]6 a' P" w* ltrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 0 \% b6 ]$ F" h8 ~; n0 V! F2 b" A; H' Q
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my & \( X# b0 |" N6 w9 y

, \$ ?" B6 ]4 H# j7 Rdeaest daughter.8 p5 w; W6 A  e( _& y
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2 P9 K; s* ~- H1 l5 F! i+ kAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!  r7 {/ j/ a. i# }. t
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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