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My Little Dog (我写的第一篇作文)

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发表于 2004-11-29 00:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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I like dog very much, I brought up a small dog named xiaohua when I was a little boy. She was my playmate because other children lived far away from my home and my bodyguard because my parents often worked very late in our land. When there was stranger around my home, xiaohua would shout at him loudly, the stranger would walk far away, and I was not so scared. But when I was twelve years old xiaohua was died of poison. I was so angry so inconsolable that I refused any food mother prepared for me. When I was alone in my room, I couldn’t help crying, I was so hated myself that I couldn’t pardon myself because I didn’t well protect her. I asked sky loudly who did this on earth! It’s who! My mother told me the whole story after half year when she thought I became calm. The reason was just xiaohua ate the person’s eggs, and he gave xiaohua poison! I came to xiaohua’s tomb which I made for her, my tears came to my face, looking at the tree on the tomb, I thought people should be friend to each other, you could tell me my dog eating your eggs, and I’d like to pay for that, how could you do that to bereave her life and made me losing my best friend? Oh my God, let the whole world people be friend forever!
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发表于 2004-11-29 19:01 | 显示全部楼层
Wow! What a touching story!!!!!!!!!
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发表于 2004-11-30 10:47 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2004-12-1 02:06 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-1 23:21 | 显示全部楼层
i am a girl, while it's my young little brother's dog, and it's him who was cried when our dog was died, and the story was true which happened to him, i just wrote with the first title.% }( b7 Y/ }( t! C3 m* [+ L* _& Z7 B
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Originally posted by 阿莉 at 2004-12-1 17:06:5 u4 u# A- z( ]4 f
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, z8 I: A1 o% Q' ABTW,you said "I like dog very much, I brought up a small dog named xiaohua when I was a little boy", are you a boy?
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-1 23:22 | 显示全部楼层
ok, no problem! there are so many stories about xiaohua. i'd like to try my best to write stories.
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Originally posted by OliveOil at 2004-11-30 10:01:
' \4 R" s' ~' f% {4 M/ j$ TWow! What a touching story!!!!!!!!!) V+ j: Q0 ?/ G! D1 `( N

+ T+ b# H: j1 t) fI would even love to read more about your Xiaohua!
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